HOMEWORK FOR TODAY
학생이 쓴 원문
1. What makes you happy? Why?
-> My test score is 100.
2. What makes you sad? Why?
-> Me angry when my dad and my mom sad.
This is because the horn bet.
강사 첨삭
Hello [이름]^^
Thanks for your time in doing your composition. I am really happy to see that you are giving
your effort in this homework. Don\'t worry about the mistakes or wrong grammar. That is part of
learning. What is important is that you were able to express your ideas.
Thanks again and see you in class^^
T. Jane^^
1. What makes you happy? Why?-> My test score is 100.>>One thing that makes me happy is when I got 100 in my test.2. What makes you sad? Why?-> Me angry when my dad and my mom sad.This is because the horn bet.
>>I am angry when my dad and my mom are sad. This is because fo the horn bet.
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