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2013-01-24 · 첨삭 강사 Jane

학생이 쓴 원문

Please write a composition about your sister. Describe her and write the things that you like about her. ->Sister, making configuration as well.Younger brother is so cute and blood group A type. Favorite color pink is alive.

강사 첨삭

Hi there, [이름]! Thank you for your composition today! I wonder how you and your sister look like. Sometimes, I can hear your sister during our class. I think she\'s very lovely just like you. Anyway, I hope that you will have a very good time today. Take care! T. JanE ^^ ->Sister, making configuration as well. >> My sister makes configuration as well. Younger brother is so cute and blood group A type. >> I\'d like to have a younger brother who\'s so cute and has a blood type A. Favorite color pink is alive. >> My favorite color is pink because it is bright.  

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