Homework for Today

2013-01-29 · 첨삭 강사 wendy

학생이 쓴 원문

Hi Wendy. What have you been up to Today? Emergency meeting came up to me last day so I couldn't attend the class. I wrote down my idea below you gave me the homework. Everyone has undergone many hardships throughout our lives, which tested, suffered and pained. However, difficult times have helped us to make a better person. See you soon. [이름]

강사 첨삭

Hi [이름]! :) I was asleep all day before going to work. I feel so tired today. Anyway, thank you for sending me your homework. You have a very good answer. Here are your corrections. Feel free to ask me questions during our class if you don\'t understand something. I\'ll call you in a few minutes. Lovelots! --T. WENDY :) Hi Wendy. >>CORRECT What have you been up to Today?>>CORRECTEmergency meeting came up to me last day so I couldn\'t attend the class. >>An emergency meeting came tp last night so I couldn\'t attend the class.I wrote down my idea below you gave me the homework. >>I wote my idea below about the homework you gave me.Everyone has undergone many hardships throughout our lives, which tested, suffered and pained. >>Everyone had undergone a lot of hardships through out our lives which tested, suffered and pained us. However, difficult times have helped us to make a better person. >>However, difficult times have helped us become a better person.See you soon. >>CORRECT[이름] >>CORRECT  

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