HOMEWORK FOR TODAY
학생이 쓴 원문
In not more than 5 sentences, tell me about your possible activities in Korea during the Seollal.
On Seol-nal, I usually bow to my parents and visit tombs of my ancestors for New Years. Sometimes I play Yut, which is the Korean traditional New Year game and made of 4 wooden sticks. Koreans like to eat rice soup on this day and I really love to eat it, too.
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름]! I hope you get to do all this activities in spite of the fact that you will celebrate the new year at work. Find ways to have fun with the people there around you. I\'ll see you next week!
T. Aurora
In not more than 5 sentences, tell me about your possible activities in Korea during the Seollal.On Seol-nal, I usually bow to my parents and visit tombs of my ancestors for New Years.
>>On Seol-nal, I usually bow to my parents and visit the tombs of my ancestors.
Sometimes I play Yut, which is the Korean traditional New Year game and made of 4 wooden sticks.
>>Sometimes I play Yut, which is a Korean traditional New Year game made of 4 wooden sticks.
Koreans like to eat rice soup on this day and I really love to eat it, too.
>> Koreans like to eat rice soup on this day too.
>>Koreans love to eat rice soup on this day too.
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