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2013-11-27 · 첨삭 강사 Juliet

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What are your weaknesses? How do you overcome them? What are your strengths and how do they help you? my weakness is I'm a perfectly. Then I always make me tired. To overcome my weakness, I keep me composer. my strength is I effort to do think logically. This helps me fiish my work sucessfully.

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Hi there!!! Being a perfectionist is not that bad at all just remember to be realistic, though. Always do your best but don\'t push yourself too much. You might not achieve happiness because you expect too much. Fulfillment and success in life lie in our ability to use our entire mind to achieve our goals, dreams and desires. Take the time to spend with yourself. You\'re worth it. See you.^^   ~T.Juliet~       What are your weaknesses? How do you overcome them? What are your strengths and how do they help you?my weakness is I\'m a perfectly. >> My weakness is that I am a perfectionist.Then I always make me tired. >> Then I always make myself tired. To overcome my weakness, I keep me composer. >> To overcome my weakness, I keep my composure.my strength is I effort to do think logically. >> My strength is I can think logically or I always make an effor to think logically.This helps me fiish my work sucessfully. >> This helps me finish my work sucessfully. >> OR: Doing that enables me to finish my work sucessfully.

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