HOMEWORK FOR TODAY
학생이 쓴 원문
What are your goals in life?
my goal in life is I become best of an actuary.
If I become a actuary, I'll make a useful insurance products.
강사 첨삭
Hi there!!! Impressive.^^ Is being an actuary popular in your country?
I rarely hear about that one. Thank you for taking the time to do all of your
homework. I appreciate it. ^^
~T.Juliet~
What are your goals in life? my goal in life is I become best of an actuary.
>> My goal in life is to become the best actuary.If I become a actuary, I\'ll make a useful insurance products.
>> If I become an actuary, I\'ll make some useful insurance products.
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