HOMEWORK FOR TODAY:

Hello again, [이름]^^

Thank you for this one.

I also think that living in a rural area is better than living in the big city.

The cost of living is not really high, and people are away from pollution and noise.

Anyway, you did a very good composition :)
See you in class!

~Teacher Becca~

Here are some corrections:

HOMEWORK FOR TODAY:
Essay: Where do you see yourself 10 years from now?
After 10 years, I probably will live in the remote country from the city.
>> After 10 years, I will probably live in a remote rural area.
At that time, my son wil go to university so that he will not live together with me.

>> By that time, my son will be going to the university and he will not be living with me.

And, I won\'t have to take care of him any more in terms of financial and educational support and I also don\'t need to live in a busy city.
>> And I won\'t have to support him in terms of financial and educational needs, and I don\'t need to live in busy city anyway.
Besides, my wife and I love to grow plants and keep farming animals and we always yearn country life that consists of farming and gardening.
>> Besides, my wife and I love to grow plants and keep farm animals. We always thought that living a rural life consists of farming and gardening.
Additionally, since farming has been no[이름] to be good for both physical health and spiritual relaxation, I will choose country life as for the retirement plan of future,

>> In addition, since farming is said to be good for both physical and spiritual health, I will choose to live a simple, rural life as one of my retirement plans in the future.