Homework for today
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Hi there!
How are you doing today?
Thank you so much for taking your time to answer the homework I gave you.
Thank you also for expressing your ideas and opinion about this topic and I really agree with your answers.
I made some corrections and hope that I was able to meet your points.
See you then tomorrow and have a great day ahead of you!
Teacher Mona.
Should student\'s textbooks be replaced by notebook computers?
No, they shouldn\'t.
>>Correct!
There are two reasons to support my idea.
>>Correct!
Firstly, computer can be used in many ways.
Therefore, even though students take a class, they are able to do totally other things.
>>Therefore, even though students are taking a class, they are able to do other things totally.Secondly, seeing through monitor makes people\'s eyes blink less according to several research.
>>Secondly, seeing through a monitor makes people\'s eyes blink less according to several research.
>> Secondly, looking at the monitor makes people\'s eyes blink less according to several research.
So it is harmful to eye\'s health.
>>So it is harmful to the eyes.with these reasons, I don\'t agree that student\'s testbook should replaced by notebook computer.
>> With these reasons, I don\'t agree that student\'s textbooks should replaced by notebook computers.
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