HOMEWORK FOR TODAY:
학생이 쓴 원문
What changes have taken place for you lately? Write about a change.
Before I met POWER English, I was so shy when I meet foreigners.
But POWER English changed me to be active, passionate in English.
I'm steel hungry in English. So I listen to children's storys in English and mimic prononciations. I hope me to get more fluent talk.
강사 첨삭
Hi there, Dr. [이름]!
Thank you for your composition today! I\'m happy to know that you are now confident to speak English with foreigners. Keep it up! Take care and see you in class!
T. JanE ^^
What changes have taken place for you lately? Write about a change.>> Correct Before I met POWER English, I was so shy when I meet foreigners.>> Before I enrolled at Power English, I was so shy when I met foreigners.
But POWER English changed me to be active, passionate in English.>> But Power English made me active and passionate in English.
I\'m steel hungry in English.
>> I\'m still hungry for English communication skills.
So I listen to children\'s storys in English and mimic prononciations.
>> So I listen to children stories in English and mimic their pronunciation.
I hope me to get more fluent talk.
>> I hope to be more fluent.
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