homework for today
학생이 쓴 원문
I'll wish for the health of my family.
Because,I don't want to see my parents die.
I want to live with my parents for a long time.
The health of my family is important.
강사 첨삭
Good evening and happy Tuesday again Tom!
Wow! You are so sweet!
I am sure that your parents are always proud of you.
They are so fortunate to have you as their son. ^^
Thank you for always being active in class.
I am looking forward for our class tomorrow.
Teacher Nina
I\'ll wish for the health of my family.
>> I will wish for good health for my family.
>> OR: I will wish that my family will always have good health Because,I don\'t want to see my parents die.
>> Correct! I want to live with my parents for a long time.
>> Correct! The health of my family is important.
>> Correct!
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