homework for today

2014-07-15 · 첨삭 강사 Nina

학생이 쓴 원문

I'll wish for the health of my family. Because,I don't want to see my parents die. I want to live with my parents for a long time. The health of my family is important.

강사 첨삭

Good evening and happy Tuesday again Tom! Wow! You are so sweet! I am sure that your parents are always proud of you. They are so fortunate to have you as their son. ^^ Thank you for always being active in class. I am looking forward for our class tomorrow. Teacher Nina   I\'ll wish for the health of my family. >> I will wish for good health for my family. >> OR: I will wish that my family will always have good health Because,I don\'t want to see my parents die. >> Correct! I want to live with my parents for a long time. >> Correct! The health of my family is important. >> Correct!

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