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2014-09-02 · 첨삭 강사 Jane

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What is one of the nicest things someone has ever done for you? I can remember a day when my daughter and son treated me and my husband a nice dinner for our wedding anniversary when they were 12 and 11 years old . I did'nt expect anything from them because they were so young. But they saved their allowance for us, and suggested to have a nice dinner at a restaurant. I was so happy. It was one of the nicest things that I've ever had. Thank you.

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Hi there, Ms. [이름]! Thank you for your composition today! Your children are so thoughtful! You and your husband must be very proud parents! That was such a very touching thing from your really young children then! T. JanE ^^ What is one of the nicest things someone has ever done for you? >> Correct I can remember a day when my daughter and son treated me and my husband a nice dinner for our wedding anniversary when they were 12 and 11 years old .>> Correct I didn\'t expect anything from them because they were so young.>> Correct But they saved their allowance for us, and suggested to have a nice dinner at a restaurant.>> Correct I was so happy.>> Correct It was one of the nicest things that I\'ve ever had.>> Correct Thank you. >> Correct

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