HOMEWORK FOR TODAY
학생이 쓴 원문
#.It is been said that computer made our life easier. #.Do you think you can live without computer? Why or why not?
I can't live without computer.
I usually use my computer in my spare time.
I can't imagine the life without computer.
If we didn't have a computer, we couldn't study english together at the POWER ENGLISH.
강사 첨삭
Hi there [이름]!
Happy hump day! It\'s good to see that you\'ve accomplished your homework.
I agree with you! I think life will be difficult without computers.
We are able to do lots of things easily using them.
However, we must know how to use a computer properly.
Because using them too much can be disadvantageous.
See you later!
~Teacher Shanee^^
#.It is been said that computer made our life easier. #.Do you think you can live without computer? Why or why not?I can\'t live without computer.
>>> Correct!I usually use my computer in my spare time.
>>> Correct!I can\'t imagine the life without computer.
>>> I can\'t imagine life without computer.If we didn\'t have a computer, we couldn\'t study english together at the POWER ENGLISH.
>>> Correct!
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