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2014-12-10 · 첨삭 강사 Shanee

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#.It is been said that computer made our life easier. #.Do you think you can live without computer? Why or why not? I can't live without computer. I usually use my computer in my spare time. I can't imagine the life without computer. If we didn't have a computer, we couldn't study english together at the POWER ENGLISH.

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Hi there [이름]!   Happy hump day! It\'s good to see that you\'ve accomplished your homework. I agree with you! I think life will be difficult without computers. We are able to do lots of things easily using them. However, we must know how to use a computer properly. Because using them too much can be disadvantageous.   See you later! ~Teacher Shanee^^   #.It is been said that computer made our life easier. #.Do you think you can live without computer? Why or why not?I can\'t live without computer. >>> Correct!I usually use my computer in my spare time. >>> Correct!I can\'t imagine the life without computer. >>> I can\'t imagine life without computer.If we didn\'t have a computer, we couldn\'t study english together at the POWER ENGLISH. >>> Correct!

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