homework for today

1. The steep cliff dropped to reefs seventy-five feet below which the reefs were barely visible through the fog. 2. Their car is gassed up so that it is ready for the long drive which will take all night. 3. Sometimes Stan went running with Blanche who was a good athlete and on the track team at school. 4. Taylor brought some candy back from Europe which wasn't shaped like American candy and tasted kind of strange to himself. 5. While government leaders like to mention the creation of new jobs which they claim indicate a strong economy, they don't mention that low-wage jobs without benefits and security have replaced many good jobs. I know that I make the same mistakes repeatedly such as a definite article and an indefinite article. In addition, I sometimes feel like that my head became suddenly spaced out and I could not to say nothing. I think that it is natural for the beginner and I hope that I can be accustomed to English and improve my communication skill.

Hi there again Sir [이름]!!   With the positive attitude towards learning that you show everyday, your level will definitely improve in no time. You just have to continue to be aware of your weaknesses and know how to effectively deal with them. Since grammar is your weakness, I encourage you to familiarize yourself with the different topics covered by it. You don\'t need to memorize everything at once because that is impossible. But as you learn little by little, you have to make sure to put the information you\'ve accumulated in practice. Remember that constant practise makes a big difference.^^   ~Teacher Shanee   1. The steep cliff dropped to reefs seventy-five feet below which the reefs were barely visible through the fog. >>> The cliffs dropped to the reefs seventy-five feet below, which were barely visible through the fog.2. Their car is gassed up so that it is ready for the long drive which will take all night. >>> Their car is gassed up and ready for an all-night drive.3. Sometimes Stan went running with Blanche who was a good athlete and on the track team at school. >>> Correct! >>> OR: Sometimes Stan went running with Blanche, a good athlete on the track team at school. 4. Taylor brought some candy back from Europe which wasn\'t shaped like American candy and tasted kind of strange to himself. >>> Taylor brought some strange-tasting candy back from Europe that wasn\'t shaped like American candy.5. While government leaders like to mention the creation of new jobs which they claim indicate a strong economy, they don\'t mention that low-wage jobs without benefits and security have replaced many good jobs.>>> Government leaders like to mention the creation of new jobs, claiming that these jobs indicate a strong economy, but ignoring the fact that low wage jobs without benefits and security have replaced many good jobs. I know that I make the same mistakes repeatedly such as a definite article and an indefinite article. >>> I know that I make the same mistakes repeatedly such as misusing definite and indefinite articles. In addition, I sometimes feel like that my head became suddenly spaced out and I could not to say nothing. >>> In addition, I sometimes I become suddenly spaced out that I cannot say anything. I think that it is natural for the beginner and I hope that I can be accustomed to English and improve my communication skill. >>> I think that that is just natural for a beginner but I hope that I can be accustomed to English and improve my communication skills.