homework for today

2015-07-03 · 첨삭 강사 Marie

학생이 쓴 원문

1. The Evil Prince was very generous. 2. He go to many different towns. 3. He stole the treasures of other lands. 4. The people of his kingdom hailed him for his accomplishments. 5. He believed the people when they sayed that he was great. 6. He commanded that the people construct a ship. 7. He did not even fear God. 8. He planned to fly his ship to heaven. 9. God sent a swarm of gnats to combat the Prince. 10. One tiny gnat defeated the Prince.

강사 첨삭

Hello again Mr. [이름]! Thanks for answering your homework.

But you missed some parts like nos. 1, 2 and 5. Kindly review if you have time.

Thanks again for today and may you enjoy your free time this weekend.

Have fun and take care! ^^


Always,
Kathrine ^^


1. The Evil Prince was very generous.

>> b. proud
 2. He go to many different towns.

>> b. travelled
 3. He stole the treasures of other lands.

>> correct!
 4. The people of his kingdom hailed him for his accomplishments.

>> correct! 
 5. He believed the people when they sayed that he was great.

>> a. said
 6. He commanded that the people construct a ship.

>>  correct! 
 7. He did not even fear God.

>>  correct! 
 8. He planned to fly his ship to heaven.

>>  correct! 
 9. God sent a swarm of gnats to combat the Prince.

>>  correct! 
 10. One tiny gnat defeated the Prince.

>>  correct! 

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