Homework for today!!
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Olivia (walks) for hours when she suddenly noticed that the sun (sinked) in the sky. She (losed) (lose) track of time because she (thinks) about the most important decision she'd ever had to make in her life.
Things (are not) the same between Olivia and her fiance, Nathan, since he accepted a job in Australia. They (knew) each other for almost five years, and in that time, they had never argued much. Lately, though, their relationship (became) stormy. They (seems) to be finding fault with each other and disagreeing about everything. For the first time, she (started) to wonder if she (is) ready for marriage. And with the wedding only twenty days away, she (needed) to make up her mind soon.
Everything in Olivia's life (went) well until her world fell apart just a month before. A large company (offers) Nathan an important position that would require him to move to France. As his wife, Julie would have to go, too.Why hadn't he discussed his decision with her?
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Happy Monday [이름]!
Good for trying to answer your homework.
Here is the answer for the last paragraph.
Although Olivia had always wanted to live abroad she felt very confused. Was she ready to move halfway across the world, leaving behind her friends and family and the only home she had ever known? If the answer was no, was she ready to say goodbye to the only man she had ever loved?
I guess, the space was not enough so you were not able to include it.
Please go over the sentences. See you again tomorrow.
~Teacher Shanee
Olivia (walks) for hours when she suddenly noticed that the sun (sinked) in the sky.
>>> Olivia had been walking for hours when she suddenly noticed that the sun was sinking in the sky.
She (losed) (lose) track of time because she (thinks) about the most important decision she\'d ever had to make in her life.>>> She had lost track of time because she had been thinking about the most important decision she\'d ever had to make in her life.Things (are not) the same between Olivia and her fiance, Nathan, since he accepted a job in Australia.
>>> Things hadn\'t been the same between Olivia and her fiance, Nathan, since he accepted a job in Australia.
They (knew) each other for almost five years, and in that time, they had never argued much.
>>> They had known each other for almost five years, and in that time, they had never argued much.
Lately, though, their relationship (became) stormy.
>>> Lately, though, their relationship had become stormy.
They (seems) to be finding fault with each other and disagreeing about everything.
>>> They seemed to be finding fault with each other and disagreeing about everything.
For the first time, she (started) to wonder if she (is) ready for marriage. And with the wedding only twenty days away, she (needed) to make up her mind soon.
>>> For the first time, she was starting to wonder if she was ready for marriage. And with the wedding only twenty days away, she needed to make up her mind soon.Everything in Olivia\'s life (went) well until her world fell apart just a month before.
>>> Everything in Olivia\'s life had been going well until her world fell apart just a month before.
A large company (offers) Nathan an important position that would require him to move to France. As his wife, Julie would have to go, too.Why hadn\'t he discussed his decision with her?
>>> A large company had offered Nathan an important position that would require him to move to France. As his wife, Olivia would have to go, too. Why hadn\'t he discussed his decision with her?
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