Homework for today!
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I don't know well but I think person who have a good life can ba alive. But the person who have a poor or a bad life can't be alive. Example of a good life is share mine with others, having a good language, and smiling to others. So other people will say this person is very good. On the other hand example of a bad life is hiting someome or have a crime, always be angry to others, and having a bad language. When the person have a little of a bad life, I think they will alive to an animal.
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I am so grateful that you accomplished another homework.
Though you\'re busy at school, you still managed to make this one.
I hope you\'ll never lose your will.
Review the sentences below. See you tomorrow!
~Teacher Shanee
I don\'t know well but I think person who have a good life can ba alive.
>>> I don\'t know well but I think a person who lives a good life can be reincarnated.
But the person who have a poor or a bad life can\'t be alive.
>>> But the person who lives a poor and bad life can\'t be.
Example of a good life is share mine with others, having a good language, and smiling to others.
>>> Some examples of a good way of living is sharing what you have with others, using only good language and smiling and being friendly to others.
So other people will say this person is very good.
>>> Correct!
On the other hand example of a bad life is hiting someome or have a crime, always be angry to others, and having a bad language.
>>> On the other hand, some examples of a bad lifestyle are committing crimes, always getting angry with other people, and using bad language.
When the person have a little of a bad life, I think they will alive to an animal.
>>> If a person is a little bit bad, I think he or she will be reincarnated as an animal.
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