Homework for today

2015-09-17 · 첨삭 강사 Shanee

학생이 쓴 원문

I think they would be my 2 cousins (1boy 1girl), my grandmothers( my grandfathers are dead), and my parents. Because they are a special family to me. And they would be all close up, because it is a party!

강사 첨삭

Calm Thursday my dear!   Thank you for writing this. I am glad that you\'re not getting tired of making your homework. I encourage you to make a longer essay. Expand your sentences and try to use the words or expressions you learned from our previous classes. That way, you\'ll be able to practice and improve your writing skills more.   ~Teacher Shanee   I think they would be my 2 cousins (1boy 1girl), my grandmothers( my grandfathers are dead), and my parents. >>> Correct! >>> OR: I think they would be my two cousins [a boy and a girl], my grandmothers [my grandfathers are already dead], and my parents. Because they are a special family to me. >>> OR: It is because they are so special to me. And they would be all close up, because it is a party! >>> That party might make us closer to each other. [I\'m sure what you mean here.]

파워잉글리쉬 영어첨삭교정 서비스에 실제로 접수된 글입니다. 작성자와 글에 등장하는 사람·회사 이름, 연락처 등 개인을 알아볼 수 있는 정보는 모두 지웠습니다. 문법 오류는 학습 자료로서의 가치를 위해 원문 그대로 두었습니다.

다른 영어첨삭교정 보기

영어첨삭교정 ·