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2015-10-26 · 첨삭 강사 Shanee

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I am really afraid of dark. Because I think the ghost will come when it is dark. I think ghost always come out when it is dark so, I don't like night time. My mom sleep with me 4~5 hours because she works at night with my dad. I always woke up at 12:30~1:30. It is my habit. Because I am afgaid of dark, I run to my grandmother's room with my cat 'Butterfly'. But often butterfly was waiting me in my grandmother's house. One night I was afraid of dark but I calm my self and I try to sleep.

강사 첨삭

Hi there [이름]!   When I was young, I was also like you. I was afraid of the dark that I couldn\'t go out if I was alone. I remember, there was one time when there\'s electricity outage in my place. I stayed beside my younger sister and really didn\'t sleep until the electricity came back. So far, I was able to overcome my fear of darkness. You\'ll totally overcome that too. See you tomorrow!   ~Teacher Shanee   I am really afraid of dark. >>> I am really afraid of the dark. Because I think the ghost will come when it is dark. >>> OR: Because I think that a ghost will come when it is dark. I think ghost always come out when it is dark so, I don\'t like night time. >>> I think that ghosts always come out when it is dark, so I don\'t like night time. My mom sleep with me 4~5 hours because she works at night with my dad. >>>  My mom sleeps with me for four to five hours only because she works until late night with my dad. I always woke up at 12:30~1:30. >>> Correct! [12:30-1:30 am] It is my habit. >>> Correct! Because I am afgaid of dark, I run to my grandmother\'s room with my cat \'Butterfly\'. >>> Because I am afraid of the dark, I run to my grandmother\'s room with my cat \"Butterfly.\" But often butterfly was waiting me in my grandmother\'s house. >>> But oftentimes, Butterfly was waiting for me in my grandmother\'s house. One night I was afraid of dark but I calm my self and I try to sleep. >>> One night, I was afraid of the dark but I calmed myself and tried to sleep.

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