Homework for today!!!
학생이 쓴 원문
- We have to less making turnel in the forest.
- We have to less making dam.
- We have to throw trash in the trashcan.
- We have to use bus, and subway when it is far.
And when it isn't far we have to walk or ride a bicycle.
- We have to use a little water.
강사 첨삭
Hi there [이름]!
All you have stated here are right!
These are just a few of the many solutions for the problem.
Thanks for doing this. Kindly review your sentences below.
~Teacher Shanee
- We have to less making turnel in the forest.
>>> We have to avoid making tunnels in the forest.- We have to less making dam.
>>> We have to make fewer dams.- We have to throw trash in the trashcan.
>>> We have to throw our trash in designated trash cans.- We have to use bus, and subway when it is far.
>>> We have to use buses or trains when we go to far places.And when it isn\'t far we have to walk or ride a bicycle.
>>> And when it isn\'t far, we have to walk or ride a bicycle.- We have to use a little water.
>>> OR: We have to watch our consumption of water.
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