Homework for today!!!

2015-12-02 · 첨삭 강사 Shanee

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I want to have a dog. Because they are cute, and the it is not boring when I stay with the dog. And they are bright and playful. I have a cat but he can't go outside with me and he sleep in the afternoon. I can't have a dog because of living in the apartment and my parents. My parents like animal but they don't like being noisy. Dogs are more active the cats. So they like running and playing with their owner. I am living in the apartment so other people in the apartment can be stressful. There is many good thing about dog. So when you have a dog play with them more and be nice th your dog.

강사 첨삭

Hi there [이름]!   I didn\'t know that you really want to have a dog. I thought that you like cats more. Anyway, when you grow up, live in a place where dogs or other pets are allowed. Take care and see you tomorrow!   ~Teacher Shanee   I want to have a dog. >>> Correct! Because they are cute, and the it is not boring when I stay with the dog. >>> It is because dogs are cute and it is not boring when I am with them. And they are bright and playful. >>> Correct! I have a cat but he can\'t go outside with me and he sleep in the afternoon. >>> I have a cat but he can\'t go outside with me and he sleeps in the afternoon. I can\'t have a dog because of living in the apartment and my parents. >>> I can\'t have a dog because I am living in an apartment and my parents don\'t allow it. My parents like animal but they don\'t like being noisy. >>> My parents like animals but they don\'t like the noise that they produce. Dogs are more active the cats. >>> Correct! So they like running and playing with their owner. >>> Correct! I am living in the apartment so other people in the apartment can be stressful. >>>OR: I am living in an apartment so the other people in the apartment can be stressed. There is many good thing about dog. >>> There are many good things about dogs. So when you have a dog play with them more and be nice th your dog. >>> So when you have a dog, play with it and be nice to it.

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