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2015-12-24 · 첨삭 강사 Nina

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hi~~nina merry christmas~ i hope you have a very nice cristmas with your family and friends. may there be peace, hopo and love in your world at cristmas time and always. i wishing you a wonderful christmas filled with joy and laughter~~ have a great time and see(?) you monday~~ 1) how you old are how old are you 2) what is name your what is your name 3) day is today what what day is today 4) are where you from where are you from 5) hobbies are what your what is your hobbies 6) time it is what what time is it 7) birthday your mum's when is when is your mum's birthday 8) who best friend is your who is your best friend 9) do subjects like what you what subjects do you like 10) enjoys who English who enjoys English

강사 첨삭

Good evening, Harry!

Merry Christmas!

Oh my! You are so sweet.
I wish you good health and more blessings this Christmas and New Year.

You are one of the best students I have. ^^

You always make me smile during the class.
Keep up the good work and always aim higher.

See you on Monday. Have a great time with your family and friends this long weekend.

Can\'t wait to talk to you again.

Teacher Nina


hi~~

>> correct

nina merry christmas~

>> correct

>> OR: Nina, Merry Christmas!

i hope you have a very nice cristmas with your family and friends.

>> I hope that you will have a very nice Christmas with your family and friends.
may there be peace, hopo and love in your world at cristmas time and always.

>> May there be peace, hope and love in your world during Christmas and always.
i wishing you a wonderful christmas filled with joy and laughter~~

>> I am wishing you a wonderful Christmas filled with joy and laughter. 
have a great time and see(?) you monday~~

>> Have a great time and see you on Monday.

 1) how you old are
how old are you
>> correct (Please put a question mark at the end of the sentence. ^^) 


2) what is name your
what is your name
>> correct (Please put a question mark at the end of the sentence. ^^) 

3) day is today what
what day is today
>> What day is it today?


4) are where you from
where are you from
>> correct (Please put a question mark at the end of the sentence. ^^) 

5) hobbies are what your
what is your hobbies
>> What are your hobbies?


6) time it is what
what time is it
>> correct (Please put a question mark at the end of the sentence. ^^) 

7) birthday your mum\'s when is
when is your mum\'s birthday
>> correct (Please put a question mark at the end of the sentence. ^^) 

>> OR: When is your mom\'s birthday?


8) who best friend is your
who is your best friend
>> correct (Please put a question mark at the end of the sentence. ^^) 


9) do subjects like what you
what subjects do you like
>> correct (Please put a question mark at the end of the sentence. ^^) 


10) enjoys who English
who enjoys English

>> correct (Please put a question mark at the end of the sentence. ^^) 

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