Homework for today.

2016-02-19 · 첨삭 강사 camille

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Today is very boring day. My head department went to a business trip to Tong young until saturday. So office is quite all day. After I finished some today's works in morning, I prepare to leave my job. Move my work files to server, and try to solve some old work. I didn't told my resination to other co-worker. We talk as usually. I'll tell them about my resignation next week. If they ask me why I leave my job, I'll told them this sentence. "Go confidently in the direction of your dreams. Live the life you have imagined" So I leave my job to find my another way. I think this sentence is romantic sentence, but have a good mean. People always want to follow dream. But realize a dream always need to hard work. I'll do my best to realize my dream.

강사 첨삭

Hi there my dear [이름], happy Friday! Thank you so much for sharing this to me... I am impressed with what you have you have written... You make me proud of you, and you inspire me a lot. Take care always and have a great weekend. xoxoTeacher Cam^^ Today is very boring day.>>Today is a very boring day.My head department went to a business trip to Tong young until saturday.>>My head department went on a business trip to Tong young until Saturday.So office is quite all day.>>It was very quiet all day in the office.After I finished some today\'s works in morning, I prepare to leave my job.>>After doing everything at work in the morning, I prepared to leave my job.Move my work files to server, and try to solve some old work.>>correctI didn\'t told my resination to other co-worker. >>I didn\'t tell my coworkers about my resignation.We talk as usually.>>We talk as usual.I\'ll tell them about my resignation next week.>>correctIf they ask me why I leave my job, I\'ll told them this sentence.>>correct\"Go confidently in the direction of your dreams. Live the life you have imagined\">>correctSo I leave my job to find my another way.>>So I will quit my job to find my other passion.I think this sentence is romantic sentence, but have a good mean.>>I think this sounds romantic but it has a good meaning.People always want to follow dream. >>correct But realize a dream always need to hard work.>>But I realize hard work is needed to achieve this.I\'ll do my best to realize my dream. >>correct

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