Homework for today!!!

I want to go to Dokdo, because there are many beautiful creature, and I didn't go to island before. And Dokdo is our country's place so I want to learn more about it. And I like oceans. Dokdo is surrounded by oceans. I went to Jeju island, and HongKong, but it was not a one day trip. In Jeju island, I went there and saw horses, slept in the hotel, and bought hallabong to gave to my uncle when I was very young with my family. I went to HongKong with mother, and friends when I was elementary students. I rode 2 floor bus, went to amusement park, and ate delicious food. I slept in the hotel, too.

Hi [이름]!   Thank you so much for sharing your experiences during your trips. I hope you enjoyed those trips.C\") Talk to you tomorrow!   ~Teacher Shanee   I want to go to Dokdo, because there are many beautiful creature, and I didn\'t go to island before. >>> I want to go to Dokdo because there many beautiful creatures there and I haven\'t been there before. And Dokdo is our country\'s place so I want to learn more about it. >>> Correct! >>> OR: And anotehr things is that Dokdo is our country\'s territory so I want to learn more about it. And I like oceans. >>> Correct! Dokdo is surrounded by oceans. >>> Correct! I went to Jeju island, and HongKong, but it was not a one day trip. >>> I went to Jeu Island and Hong Kong but it was not a one day trip. In Jeju island, I went there and saw horses, slept in the hotel, and bought hallabong to gave to my uncle when I was very young with my family. >>> I went to Jeju Island with my family when I was young. In there, I saw horses, I slept in a hotel, and I bought hallabong for my uncle. I went to HongKong with mother, and friends when I was elementary students. >>>> I went to Hong Kong with my mother and friends when I was an elementary student. I rode 2 floor bus, went to amusement park, and ate delicious food. >>> I rode a double-decker bus, went to an amusement park and ate delicious food. I slept in the hotel, too. >>> Correct! >>> OR: I slept in a hotel, too.