Homework for today!!!
학생이 쓴 원문
I want to write about Suwon Hwaseong Fortress.
Hwaseong is the wall surrounding the centre of Suwon, the provincial capital of
Gyeonggi-do, South Korea. Hwaseong Fortress was built over two and a half years, from
1794 to 1796, according to the designs of the architect Jeong Yak-yong. Also, Jeong
Yak-yong made cable driving system, that is important thing to built Suwon Hwaseong
Fortress.
강사 첨삭
Thanks for writing about Suwon Hwaesong Fortress [이름]!
You did great with your sentences.
Please continue to imprive your writing skills.
~Teacher Shanee
I want to write about Suwon Hwaseong Fortress. >>> Correct!Hwaseong is the wall surrounding the centre of Suwon, the provincial capital of Gyeonggi-do, South Korea.
>>> Correct!
Hwaseong Fortress was built over two and a half years, from1794 to 1796, according to the designs of the architect Jeong Yak-yong.
>>> Correct!
Also, Jeong Yak-yong made cable driving system, that is important thing to built Suwon Hwaseong Fortress.
>>> Correct!
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