HOMEWORK FOR TODAY

2016-09-05 · 첨삭 강사 Erine

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HOMEWORK FOR TODAY: How do you feel when the feedback you are expecting is delayed? How do you deal with this kind of situation? Write an essay. - In that case, I will be disappointed.But I will wait the feedback or result until I get it while I conducts another task.

강사 첨삭

Hello there, Owen!^^

Thank you for answering the essay question.

However, you only gave me two sentences.

You can express more of your ideas by giving more sentences.

See you again.
~~Teacher Erine~~

HOMEWORK FOR TODAY:
How do you feel when the feedback you are expecting is delayed? How do you deal with this kind of situation? Write an essay.
- In that case, I will be disappointed.

>> In that case,

But I will wait the feedback or result until I get it while I conducts another task.

>> But I will wait for the feedback or result until I get it while I conduct another task.

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