HOMEWORK FOR TODAY:

Hello Ma\'am [이름]!

Thank you very much for sharing these things to me.

Your sister seems to be a very responsible person.

I hope she gets what she deserves for being a good family member.

See you tomorrow.^^

~Teacher Shanee^^,

Composition making: Write an essay about the best person you ever met in your life. Include your best memories together.
Who is the best person I have ever met?

>>> Correct!
 In this case first I always remember famous people.

>>> In this case, I always remember famous people first.

But I don’t know Who that person is, So Next time I looked around me then there were a lot of people.

>>> I have met a lot of good people but I can\'t remember all their names.

The best person of them is my eld sister.

>>> The best person among them is my older sister.

She have been taking care of our family since she was in elementary school.

>>> She has been taking care of our family since she was in elementary school.

at that time our parents had been busy so she used to go to school after doing housework.

>>> At that time, our parents had been busy so she used to go to school after doing some housework.

now my parents are bedridden patient and her caring is continuing until now

>>> Now, our parents are already bedridden and she is continuing to take good care of them.