HOMEWORK FOR TODAY
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Good evening, Jacob!^_^
Smile! It\'s Friday! (^_^)
Thank you so much for accomplishing your homework.
I know your very busy reviewing for your upcoming final exams, but you still manage to do the assignments I give you.
I really appreciate that. I can\'t wait to talk to you again.
See you later in class!^^ Enjoy the rest of the night!
_T. Mayleen :)
I agree with the opinion that participating in team sports promotes to develop good character.
>> I agree that participating in team sports helps develop good character.
Because someone who experienced team sports learn that 1+1 is not 2 but more than 2 and for good result have to cooperate with teammate.
>> Because someone who experienced team sports learn the no man is an island and cooperation leads to good result.
So it is good to inhence one\'s personality.
>> So it is good to enhance one\'s personality.
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