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2016-12-09 · 첨삭 강사 Mayleen

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Creative Writing: Participating in team sports helps to develop good character. Do you agree or disagree? I agree with the opinion that participating in team sports promotes to develop good character. Because someone who experienced team sports learn that 1+1 is not 2 but more than 2 and for good result have to cooperate with teammate. So it is good to inhence one's personality.

강사 첨삭

Good evening, Jacob!^_^

Smile! It\'s Friday! (^_^)


Thank you so much for accomplishing your homework.

I know your very busy reviewing for your upcoming final exams, but you still manage to do the assignments I give you.

I really appreciate that. I can\'t wait to talk to you again.

See you later in class!^^ Enjoy the rest of the night!


_T. Mayleen :)


I agree with the opinion that participating in team sports promotes to develop good character.

>> I agree that participating in team sports helps develop good character.


Because someone who experienced team sports learn that 1+1 is not 2 but more than 2 and for good result have to cooperate with teammate.

>> Because someone who experienced team sports learn the no man is an island and cooperation leads to good result.


So it is good to inhence one\'s personality.

>> So it is good to enhance one\'s personality.

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