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2016-12-09 · 첨삭 강사 Shanee

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1. We all told the boss that we wanted to have ours salaries paid in advance but he just ignored it. 2. When the man asked me how I had got his address, I told him that I was given it by a relative of him. 3. Although no one in the room seemed to follow anything said by the speaker, he never intended to simplify his language. 4. I hope you will enjoy yourself at the re-union party this weekend because I won't be able to be there myself. 5. We decided to do all the cooking by ourselves instead of hiring a catering company for the party.6. Thousands of children nowadays prefer doing their homework with a background of pop-music to doing it in a quiet room. 7. You and your brother need to take time to prepare yourselves for the long journey which will start next month. 8. The kids watched each gesture of them as if their mother were a stranger. 9. Trademarks enable a company to distinguish their products from it of another company.

강사 첨삭

Good job Ma\'am!
It\'s impressive how you still find some time to do your homework despite your very busy schedule.
I hope you have a good weekend. See you on Monday!

~Teacher Shanee^^,

1. We all told the boss that we wanted to have ours salaries paid in advance but he just ignored it.
>>> We told the boss that we wanted to have our salaries paid in advance but he just ignored us.
2. When the man asked me how I had got his address, I told him that I was given it by a relative of him.
>>> When the man asked me how I had got his address, I told him that I was given it by a relative of his.
3. Although no one in the room seemed to follow anything said by the speaker, he never intended to simplify his language.
>>> Correct!
4. I hope you will enjoy yourself at the re-union party this weekend because I won\'t be able to be there myself.
>>> Correct!
5. We decided to do all the cooking by ourselves instead of hiring a catering company for the party.
>>> Correct!
6. Thousands of children nowadays prefer doing their homework with a background of pop-music to doing it in a quiet room.
>>> Correct!
7. You and your brother need to take time to prepare yourselves for the long journey which will start next month.
>>> Correct!
8. The kids watched each gesture of them as if their mother were a stranger.
>>> The kids watched each gesture of her as if their mother were a stranger.
9. Trademarks enable a company to distinguish their products from it of another company.
>>> Trademarks enable a company to distinguish its products from those of another company.
10. ---- cannot see through translucent materials, but light can pass through ----.
->>> One cannot see through translucent materials, but light can pass through them.

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