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2016-12-23 · 첨삭 강사 Mayleen

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Creative Writing: Everyone's addicted to something in some shape or form. What is something you can't go without? I cannot go out with pajama or training suit. I think I addicted to the concept which has to wear clothings to go out.

강사 첨삭

Hi there, Jacob!^^

Good afternoon!


I know someone who is somehow similar to you. But I think that\'s fine.

You just want to dress appropriately and look decent before going out.

Thank you so much for this composition.

I\'ll see you later in class.

Merry Christmas! (^_-)//


_T. Mayleen_


I cannot go out with pajama or training suit. I think I addicted to the concept which has to wear clothings to go out.

>> I cannot go out with my pajama or training suit. I think I\'m addicted to the concept of dressing up or wearing appropriate clothes before going out.

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