HOMEWORK FOR TODAY
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Good evening, Jacob!^_^
Wow! I didn\'t know that you\'re a leader of a youth group.
I guess that\'s why you\'re active when it comes to organization activities such as volunteering.
In my opinion, you are a role model to other young adults.
I hope you inspire more people to be active just like you.
_T. Mayleen :)
First, I succeeded transfer university it allows me saving lots of time and money.
>> First, I succeeded in transferring to a university that allowed me to save time and money.
And, I\'ve elected as a leader of catholic youth group. Being a leader always good experience.
>> Second, I was elected as the leader of a Catholic Youth group. Being a leader is always a good experience.
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