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2016-12-29 · 첨삭 강사 Mayleen

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Can you think of two things you were happy about 2016? -> First, I succeeded transfer university it allows me saving lots of time and money. And, I've elected as a leader of catholic youth group. Being a leader always good experience.

강사 첨삭

Good evening, Jacob!^_^


Wow! I didn\'t know that you\'re a leader of a youth group.

I guess that\'s why you\'re active when it comes to organization activities such as volunteering.

In my opinion, you are a role model to other young adults.

I hope you inspire more people to be active just like you.


_T. Mayleen :)


First, I succeeded transfer university it allows me saving lots of time and money.

>> First, I succeeded in transferring to a university that allowed me to save time and money.


And, I\'ve elected as a leader of catholic youth group. Being a leader always good experience.

>> Second, I was elected as the leader of a Catholic Youth group. Being a leader is always a good experience.

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