HOMEWORK FOR TODAY:
학생이 쓴 원문
Water or food: which one can't you live without? Why?
I don’t live without food. Because they provide lots of nutrients, including water.
However, water is more essential nutrient. People don’t live for 2 month without water. Water helps maintain body temperature, nutrients, oxygen, and blood supply, and acts as a shock to cell tissue.
강사 첨삭
Hi Jinny^^
A wonderful evening to you. ^^
Thank you so much for sending in your homework despite of your busy schedule.
I really appreciate it. ^^ It can be a very good practice that you might want to use in the future.
Especially, if you want to do some review and practice more on your English communication skills.
See you in class ^^
Teacher Glenda
Here are my corrections:
Water or food: which one can\'t you live without? Why?
I don’t live without food. Because they provide lots of nutrients, including water.
>> I can\'t live without food because they provide lots of nutrients including water.
However, water is more essential nutrient. People don’t live for 2 month without water. Water helps maintain body temperature, nutrients, oxygen, and blood supply, and acts as a shock to cell tissue.
>> However, water is a more essential nutrient. People can\'t live for 2 months without water. Water helps maintain body temperature, nutrients, oxygen in the blood supply, and acts as a shock absorber of the cell tissue.
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