HOMEWORK FOR TODAY:
학생이 쓴 원문
Answer the following in not more than five sentences:
What is your greatest goal this 2017?
I have to read fifth books and travel to Africa during 1month.
For it have to, i will use my time well and i am saving money.
Most important preparing for long trip is strong health, so i will exercise everyday.
강사 첨삭
Hi there, Ms. [Name]!
Thanks for your composition! Whoa! This is the second one in a row. Thanks for being a responsible student. Keep it up!
T. JanE ^^
I have to read fifth books and travel to Africa during 1month.
>> I have to read five books, and I want to travel to Africa for a month.
For it have to, i will use my time well and i am saving money.
>> I will use my time well, and I am saving money.
Most important preparing for long trip is strong health, so i will exercise everyday.
>> The most important preparation for a long trip is to be healthy, so I will exercise every day.
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