HOMEWORK FOR TODAY:

2017-02-01 · 첨삭 강사 Jane

학생이 쓴 원문

1. They stayed at home because it was raining heavily. 2. People cause accidents because they drink and drive. 3. Tommy went to his friends and he had had lunch. 4. I wanted to help him, because he said he could do it himself. 5. You should know that smoking is bad for your health.

강사 첨삭

Hi there, Ms. [Name]!

Thanks for your composition today! I hope you will enjoy the rest of the day. Take care and stay happy!

T. JanE ^^

1. They stayed at home because it was raining heavily.
>> Correct
2. People cause accidents because they drink and drive.
>> People cause accidents when they drink and drive. 
3. Tommy went to his friends and he had had lunch.
>> Correct 
4. I wanted to help him, because he said he could do it himself.
>> I wanted to help him but he said he could do it himself. 
5. You should know that smoking is bad for your health.

>> Correct

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