HOMEWORK FOR TODAY:

2017-02-02 · 첨삭 강사 Glenda

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. I must made his power point presentation. >> I must make his powerpoint presentation. 2. He wants best power point.. >> He wanted best of powerpoint 3. He order me more better power point. >> He Ordered me to build his Power Point. 4. I made for him and send him. >> I made it for him and send it to him. 5. We dependent on computer a little. >> we are dependent on computer a little/ 6. More useful and economic mediator. >> Computers are more useful and economical media. 1.Distribute the risk. 2. Although the majority of people in extreme time tend to be wise and cautious, absolute silence is pernicious. 3. Although the play is over, the actor who remembers it will save his music

강사 첨삭

A great Thursday evening, Maria! ^^


A big thank you for doing your homework and adding your own corrections on some of the

grammar slips I listed. Good job^^ Keep it up!


Teacher Glenda



This are my corrections:

1. I must made his power point presentation.
>> I must make his powerpoint presentation.

>> Correct

 2. He wants best power point..
>> He wanted best of powerpoint

>> He wanted the best power point.

 3. He order me more better power point.
>> He Ordered me to build his Power Point.
>> He ordered me to create his power point.


4. I made for him and send him.
>> I made it for him and send it to him.

>> Correct


 5. We dependent on computer a little.
>> we are dependent on computer a little/

>> Correct

or

>> We are a bit dependent on computers.


 6. More useful and economic mediator.
>> Computers are more useful and economical media.

>> Correct

or

>> Computers are more useful and economical.


 1.Distribute the risk.
(Don\'t put all your eggs in one basket )

>> Correct

or

>> Don\'t risk everything on the success of one venture.
 2. Although the majority of people in extreme time tend to be wise and cautious, absolute silence is pernicious. (Drastic times call for drastic measures)

>> Correct

or

>>  In difficult situations, it is necessary to take drastic actions.
 3. Although the play is over, the actor who remembers it will save his music.  (Elvis has left the building)

>> This expression means the or a show/event has ended.

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