HOMEWORK FOR TODAY
학생이 쓴 원문
Where is the best place to meet new people?
Cafe is the best place for me to meet new people. There are many kinds of cafe in Korea such as Starbuck, coffee been and Two some, etc. Most students visit cafe to study and to meet their friends. According to any research, Korean consumed coffee more than any other country. I also drink two or three cups of coffee a day. We have a cafe in our buindling to meet any visitor.
What are some things that you usually talk about when you meet a new person?
When I meet a new person, I have difficulty in finding material of conversation. At that time, the weather and pollution are good material of conversation. Especially, Korea has various weather such as four season and is frequently suffering from fine dust and yellow dust from China. It is related to weather, pollution and international cooperation. Through this process, I could talk about various subjects with new person and move to other subject naturally.
강사 첨삭
Good afternoon, [이름]! (^_^)
Happy Tuesday!
Thank you so much for this composition.
I\'ve read it well. Those you\'ve mentioned are good topics to talk about.
I\'m looking forward to having a conversation with you today.
See you later in class! :)
..Teacher Mayleen ^^
Where is the best place to meet new people?Cafe is the best place for me to meet new people.
>> CORRECT!
OR: For me, it\'s best to meet new people in a cafe.
There are many kinds of cafe in Korea such as Starbuck, coffee been and Two some, etc.
>> CORRECT!
Capitalize the first letter of proper nouns such as names of establichments.
Most students visit cafe to study and to meet their friends.
>> CORRECT!
According to any research, Korean consumed coffee more than any other country.
>> According to research, Korea consumes coffee more than ano other country.
I also drink two or three cups of coffee a day.
>> I also drink 2 to 3 cups of coffee a day.
We have a cafe in our buindling to meet any visitor. >> We have a cafe in our building where we can entertain visitors.
What are some things that you usually talk about when you meet a new person?
When I meet a new person, I have difficulty in finding material of conversation.
>> When I meet a new person, I have difficulty starting a conversation.
At that time, the weather and pollution are good material of conversation.
>> At times, the weather and pollution are good topics for a a conversation.
Especially, Korea has various weather such as four season and is frequently suffering from fine dust and yellow dust from China.
>> ESpecially here in Korea, we have four seasons and we also frequently suffer from the fine, yellow dust coming from China.
It is related to weather, pollution and international cooperation.
>> CORRECT!
Through this process, I could talk about various subjects with new person and move to other subject naturally.
>> Having these in mind, I could talk about various subjects with a new person and move to other subjects or topics naturally.
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