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2017-10-30 · 첨삭 강사 Mayleen

학생이 쓴 원문

Writing Exercise: 'CHUSEOK' Choose one (1) keyword and describe/explain it in not more than five (5) sentences. ^-^ 1. Charye 2. Seongmyo 3. Songpyeon 4. Jeon/Pajeon 5. Hangawi Seongmyo Korea had been driven by Confucianism for a long time which emphasize filial piety to parents and fidelity to King. Korean has traditionally respected his parents and ancestors. According to this traditional culture, korean go to his ancestor's tomb and bow his ancestor in front of the tomb twice a year, that is lunar new year day and thanksgiving day.

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Good evening, [이름]! ^^,)


Seongmyo: Another traditional custom of Chuseok is seongmyo, or visit to the ancestral graves. Seongmyo is an old tradition that is still carried out as to show respect and appreciation for family ancestors. During seongmyo, family members remove the weeds that have grown around the graves and pay respect to the deceased with a simple memorial service. [Source: visitkorea]


Thank you for doing your homework.^^

I will see you later in class!


_T. Mayleen :)


Korea had been driven by Confucianism for a long time which emphasize filial piety to parents and fidelity to King.

>>> Korea had been driven by Confucianism for a long time which emphasized on filial piety and fidelity to the king.


Korean has traditionally respected his parents and ancestors.

>>> It\'s a Korean tradition to respect their parents and ancestors.


According to this traditional culture, korean go to his ancestor\'s tomb and bow his ancestor in front of the tomb twice a year, that is lunar new year day and thanksgiving day.

>>> According to this tradition, Koreans go to their ancestors\' tomb and bow twice a year - - during Lunar New Year and Thanksgiving Day.

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