HOMEWORK FOR TODAY:

2017-11-22 · 첨삭 강사 Jane

학생이 쓴 원문

Fill in the blanks with your own words to complete the thought of the sentence. Explain your answers in two to three sentences. The most boring thing about _____ is _____. Watching sports game is very boring. Because I am active person so I always play game myself. And that is not good for health because we eat beer and chicken and no activity.

강사 첨삭

Hi there, Ms. [Name]!

Thanks for your composition today! Please be guided by the corrections I provided below. Have a great afternoon!

T. JanE ^^

Fill in the blanks with your own words to complete the thought of the sentence. Explain your answers in two to three sentences.
The most boring thing about _____ is _____.
Watching sports game is very boring. Because I am active person so I always play game myself. And that is not good for health because we eat beer and chicken and no activity.

>> Watching sports game is very boring. I am a very active person, so I\'d rather play the games myself. Moreover, it\'s not good for our health because we drink beer and eat chicken without any activity.

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