HOMEWORK FOR TODAY
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Good afternoon, [이름]! ^^,) Happy Thursday!
Thank you for doing your homework.
You\'re right that being an athlete means sacrificing a lot.
However, I guess it also depends on how you balance your time and how you manage your priorities.
I will see you later then in class.^^ Enjoy the rest of the day!
_T. Mayleen :)
While I would like to play sport for a hobby, I wouldn\'t like to play sport for a living.
>>> While I would like to play sport as a hobby, I wouldn\'t like to play sport for a living.
It is very competitive and only the people on the top class of the sport could get much money.
>>> Correct!
Therefore the people who plays sport for a living has no choice but to concentrate on the sport and has no time to spare for other things.
>>> Therefore, people who play sport for a living have no choice but to concentrate on the sport and have no time to spare for other things
Consequently the people often says that the sport means all things in his life.
>>> Consequently, athletes often say that the sport means everything to them.
I wouldn\'t like to live such a life.
>>> I wouldn\'t want to live that kind of life.
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