Homework for TOPIC 5,6
학생이 쓴 원문
Topic 5
Why do you want to work for us? What can you bring to our company?
I believe I can contribute to your company with my overseas sales experience and export operation knowledge.
I have experience meeting buyers through international exhibitions and export consultation meetings, and I successfully secured a new contract with a distributor in Mongolia.
I am confident in communicating with buyers, building relationships, and solving problems quickly. I believe these skills can help expand your overseas business and create new sales opportunities.
TOPIC 6
What are your greatest professional strengths?
In my previous roles, I worked closely with buyers, factories, internal teams, and logistics partners. I believe I am good at keeping everyone aligned, sharing information quickly, and solving problems efficiently. This helped me maintain smooth operations and build trust with business partners.
강사 첨삭
Hi, Ms. [Name][이름]! Your answers are already very solid and professional. You clearly show real international experience, especially in exports and buyer communication, which is exactly what interviewers look for in overseas sales roles. I also like that you included a real achievement (the Mongolia contract) because it makes your answer more convincing and practical. With just a bit of polishing, your responses can sound even more natural and confident in an interview.
Why do you want to work for us? What can you bring to our company?
I believe I can contribute to your company with my overseas sales experience and export operation knowledge.
In my previous roles, I worked closely with buyers, factories, internal teams, and logistics partners.
~T. Jenna
Topic 5
Why do you want to work for us? What can you bring to our company?
I believe I can contribute to your company with my overseas sales experience and export operation knowledge.
>>I believe I can contribute to your company with my overseas sales experience and export operations knowledge.
I have experience meeting buyers through international exhibitions and export consultation meetings, and I successfully secured a new contract with a distributor in Mongolia.
I have experience meeting buyers through international exhibitions and export consultation meetings, and I successfully secured a new contract with a distributor in Mongolia.
>>Correct
I am confident in communicating with buyers, building relationships, and solving problems quickly.
I am confident in communicating with buyers, building relationships, and solving problems quickly.
>>Correct
I believe these skills can help expand your overseas business and create new sales opportunities.
>>Correct
TOPIC 6
What are your greatest professional strengths?
>>Correct
TOPIC 6
What are your greatest professional strengths?
In my previous roles, I worked closely with buyers, factories, internal teams, and logistics partners.
>>Correct
I believe I am good at keeping everyone aligned, sharing information quickly, and solving problems efficiently.
>>Correct
This helped me maintain smooth operations and build trust with business partners.
>>Correct
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Topic 5
Why do you want to work for us? What can you bring to our company?
>>I believe I can contribute to your company through my experience in overseas sales and export operations. In my previous role, I had the opportunity to meet international buyers through trade exhibitions and export consultation meetings. During one of these projects, I successfully secured a new contract with a distributor in Mongolia, which strengthened my confidence in handling international business negotiations. I am also confident in my ability to communicate effectively with buyers, build strong long-term relationships, and respond quickly to challenges. I believe these strengths can help expand your overseas business and create new sales opportunities.
TOPIC 6
What are your greatest professional strengths?
>> One of my greatest professional strengths is my ability to coordinate effectively between multiple stakeholders. In my previous roles, I worked closely with buyers, factories, internal teams, and logistics partners. I made sure that communication stayed clear and consistent across all parties, and I focused on sharing updates quickly to avoid misunderstandings or delays. I am also strong at problem-solving in fast-paced situations. This approach helped me maintain smooth operations and build strong trust with both internal teams and external business partners.
TOPIC 6
What are your greatest professional strengths?
>> One of my greatest professional strengths is my ability to coordinate effectively between multiple stakeholders. In my previous roles, I worked closely with buyers, factories, internal teams, and logistics partners. I made sure that communication stayed clear and consistent across all parties, and I focused on sharing updates quickly to avoid misunderstandings or delays. I am also strong at problem-solving in fast-paced situations. This approach helped me maintain smooth operations and build strong trust with both internal teams and external business partners.
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