Homework for wednesday

Hi Karen~Thanks for teaching me so many things about English. You always help me a lot and I really appreciate it. Today's question is 'Why do you think some people fail to achieve their dreams' I think there could be various reasons but also they could be just excuses if people don't try hard enough to get their dreams succeed. Especially in my age, I belive there is no limit to make my dreams come true if I challenge obstacles given to me without being coward or fearful. Have a good day and don't forget take an umbrella!(Storm is coming, also it will be heavy rains starting tonight)

Hi there Sang Hwa! ^__^

Thanks for taking time to make your homework once again. I don\'t mind helping you, in fact, it is such a pleasure just knowing that I am helping you in one way or another. If you have any questions please feel free to ask me. I love your opinion by the way. I do agree that most people make excuses. There are those who complain a lot without actually exerting any effort to be better or to at least reach their goals. I think the saying \"Good things come to those who wait\" isn\'t necessarily true. I suppose it\'s better to say \"Good things come to those who work their butts off\" kkkk. I see that attitude in you, so I believe you will achieve your dreams in the future , so go ahead and start selecting the American university of your choice! Talk to you on Friday! Take care and enjoy your afternoon! ^___^

~t.Karen (.-___-)

Hi Karen~

>> Correct grammar! But please check your punctuation mark. Always end your sentence with either a period [ . ] , question mark [ ? ] or an exclamation point [ ! ]. 

>> Hi Karen .   

Thanks for teaching me so many things about English.

>> Correct! ^^ 

You always help me a lot and I really appreciate it.
>> Correct! ^^  Today\'s question is \'Why do you think some people fail to achieve their dreams\'

>> Correct grammar! But please check your punctuation mark. Always end your sentence with either a period [ . ] , question mark [ ? ] or an exclamation point [ ! ]. 

>> ** Don\'t forget to use quotation marks [ \" \" ] to introduce topics or titles. 

>>  Today\'s question is \"Why do you think some people fail to achieve their dreams\" . 

I think there could be various reasons but also they could be just excuses if people don\'t try hard enough to get their dreams succeed.

>> I think that there could be various reasons but it\'s also possible that they\'re just making excuses when they don\'t try hard enough to achieve their dreams. 

Especially in my age, I belive there is no limit to make my dreams come true if I challenge obstacles given to me without being coward or fearful.

>> Especially in my age, I believe that there is no limit to making my dreams come true if I challenge the obstacles given to me without being fearful. 

or 

>> Especially in my age, I believe that there is no limit to making my dreams come true if I challenge the obstacles given to me without being a coward. 

>> ** Don\'t forget your article \"THE\" and \"A\". 

>> ** Be careful with your spelling: \"BELIEVE\". 

Have a good day and don\'t forget take an umbrella!

>> Correct! ^^ 

(Storm is coming, also it will be heavy rains starting tonight)

>> (A storm is coming so there\'ll be heavy rains starting tonight.) 

>> ** Don\'t forget your article \"A\".