Homework for whensday

Use the following word in a sentence. 1. contemporary Beatles music was innovative and shocking at 1960s. Although It was made at 40 years ago, It is refined more than contemporary music. 2. adept I was adept at lying in my childhood. I always lied to my academy teacher --like I am sick, I have a serious problem in my home-- to avoid the class and have fun with my friends. 3. industrious I think I was industrious at last school term. I always submitted my report and reviewed what I had studied. Thereby, I got a good grade. I'm so proud of myself. I did 20th writing homework today!!! Now, I can get free phone lessons first time since I came here. Always thank you for correcting my homework. See you in class~~

Hi there  Good job on your 20th composition!! You finally made it. I hope you\'ll keep on sending your compositions each day. ^^ Remember, when speaking English, try to become less hesitant and more confident. I can\'t wait for our next conversation. c\",) Smile and make the most of your days. Take care and talk to you soon then. Teacher Sheela Here are my corrections for you: se the following word in a sentence.1. contemporaryBeatles music was innovative and shocking at 1960s. >> Correct Although It was made at 40 years ago, It is refined more than contemporary music.>> Although it became famous 40 years ago it is more refined than the contemporary music.2. adeptI was adept at lying in my childhood. >> Correct I always lied to my academy teacher --like I am sick, I have a serious problem in my home-- to avoid the class and have fun with my friends.>> Correct3. industriousI think I was industrious at last school term. >> I think I was an industrious student in the last school term. I always submitted my report and reviewed what I had studied. >> Correct Thereby, I got a good grade. I\'m so proud of myself. >> Therefore, I got a good grade. I\'m so proud if myself.I did 20th writing homework today!!! >> I\'m done with my 20th composition today. Now, I can get free phone lessons first time since I came here. >> Now I can get free phone lessons for the first time since I started this. Always thank you for correcting my homework. See you in class~~ >> Correct