homework(fri)
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Q) Write about a time you cheated and were caught
A) I cheated the test with my friend when i was highschool student.
I colluded with my friend before the test and i got good grades in math.
But the lies don't keep going for a long time.
After that, We commited it again in other exam and were caught by our teacher.
Finally, we couldn't get a good grade and do other exam.
I realized people must be honest. A person who trys to cheat someone suffers same that.
sir~ please, could you correct my grammar errors for me?
=> The next year's goal is to adapt well and study very hard to get a aviation certification after entering the school.
Also, i hope my family to be healthy and i'll always pray for them.
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Hello [이름] Do,
Thank you for answering your homework.
~~ Teacher Kathy
I cheated the test with my friend when i was highschool student.
>> My friend an I cheated on our test when we were a high school student.
I colluded with my friend before the test and i got good grades in math.
I colluded with my friend before the test and i got good grades in math.
>> I colluded with my friend before the test and I got good grades in math.
But the lies don\'t keep going for a long time.
>> But lies won\'t stay for long.
>> But you can\'t keep secrets forever.
After that, We commited it again in other exam and were caught by our teacher.
After that, We commited it again in other exam and were caught by our teacher.
>> We committed the same things again and finally caught buy our teacher.
Finally, we couldn\'t get a good grade and do other exam.
>> We didn\'t get good grades in math.
I realized people must be honest. A person who trys to cheat someone suffers same that.
I realized people must be honest. A person who trys to cheat someone suffers same that.
>> I realized that people mush be honest. If a person tries to cheat, he will suffer in the end.
The next year\'s goal is to adapt well and study very hard to get a aviation certification after entering the school.
Also, i hope my family to be healthy and i\'ll always pray for them.
>> My goal for next year is to adapt and study hard so I can get an aviation certificate after entering a school.
>> I hope my family will stay healthy and I\'ll always pray for them.
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