homework(fri)
학생이 쓴 원문
Q) What would you do if you were late for an important appointment?
A) If i have an important appointment I'll usually go there in advance
and i'll wait for you.
but if i'm so late i'll sincerely appologize. Also i'll pursuade you why i'm so late.
Hello, nice teacher~
Have a nice weekend!
I know today's class was our final class.
It's shame that i can't hear your voice anymore.
Thank you for your effort for 1 month.
i'm rooting for you forever.
please , correct my grammar errors.
1. Yes, I resigned my company to study in october.
Because I had to study for aviation, english to enter the school in US.
But when I worked at the company I couldn't have any time.
Almost of the Korean people work until late in their company.
So I decided I resigned the company and I could concentrate. I only studied very hard for 3 month.
2. I went to the movie and ate dinner with my girlfriend yesterday.
Also, i studied the prior-education with ooo three times a week.
강사 첨삭
Hello [이름] Do,
Thank you for sending your homework.
~ Teacher Kathy
If i have an important appointment I\'ll usually go there in advance
and i\'ll wait for you.
and i\'ll wait for you.
>> If I have an important appointment I will go there earlier than said time.
but if i\'m so late i\'ll sincerely appologize. Also i\'ll pursuade you why i\'m so late.
>> But if I will be late, I will sincerely ask for an apology and explain why.
1. Yes, I resigned my company to study in october.
>> I decided to resign in my previous company so I could study English last October.
Because I had to study for aviation, english to enter the school in US.
Because I had to study for aviation, english to enter the school in US.
>> I needed to study English so I could enter the aviation school in the United States of America.
But when I worked at the company I couldn\'t have any time.
But when I worked at the company I couldn\'t have any time.
>> But as soon as I start working, I will not have much time.
Almost of the Korean people work until late in their company.
Almost of the Korean people work until late in their company.
>> Korean people usually work late in their company.
So I decided I resigned the company and I could concentrate. I only studied very hard for 3 month.
So I decided I resigned the company and I could concentrate. I only studied very hard for 3 month.
>> I need to concentrate and study well for 3 months.
2. I went to the movie and ate dinner with my girlfriend yesterday.
2. I went to the movie and ate dinner with my girlfriend yesterday.
>> My girlfriend and I ate dinner and watched movie yesterday.
Also, i studied the prior-education with ooo three times a week.
Also, i studied the prior-education with ooo three times a week.
>> I am attending a prior-education three times a week.
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