homework(friday)
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Remember that learning English requires action. One small action is more powerful than reading hundreds of articles. Yes, we know it is very hard to do things, even if they are good for us.
I commend you for being so active and alert to listen and speak the language; continue that attitude because you can achieve many things in learning English.
Don\'t pull yourself down!!!!
First, When i worked at the company, I lied to my team leader who is very vicious.
>>When I first worked in the company, I lied to my team leader who is very vicious.
He directed unreasonable something to many coworkers. so many people didn\'t follow him.
>>He directed unreasonable work to many co-workers, so many people didn\'t follow him.
in december last year, our company said that coworkers should evaluate process to each other which has worked for a years.
>>Last December of last year, our company asked us to evaluate each other who have been working in the company for years.
so, i had to evaluate to my team leader.
>>So I had to evaluate to my team leader.
After end of evaluation period, he asked to me carefully, \"how did you evaluate to my level\"?
>> After the evaluation, he asked me carefully, \"How did you evaluate my level\"?
so i lied to him. \"Great, nice, perfect your work\" but actually, i evaluated 0. (the tyeps of level divide 5 grades from 0 to 5 level)
>>I lied to him, I told him, \"Great, nice!\" but actually, I gave him 0. (The level was divided by 5 from 0 to 5 level)
Maybe, after he would have known that i gave him 0 level..
>>Maybe, after that he would have known that I gave him 0.
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