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I heard about Before the Floodright after it was shown on Netflix.However, I wasn\'t interested in our enviornment,and so I didn\'t watch it then.As I did a science project at school,I first watched it.Before I watched this movie,I couldn\'t remember the plot vividly.All I could think of was that Leonardo DiCaprio is the presenter of this documentary.He meets leading experts working to create sustainable future.Such as the president of U.S,Pope Francis. They talk about the ways for our children to see what we\'re seeing today.Overall,the theme of this movie is climate change.One of the most memorable scenes is when DiCaprio meets Micael E.Mann,a climatology and goephysicist.He explains why we cannot rely on politics to consider the Earth.Fossil fuels make profits to companies.Politicians get donations from companies.Though I have guessed money would hinder from implementing solutions,it was shocking to see the specific number.I realized environmental problems are more serious than thought.
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I heard about Before the Floodright after it was shown on Netflix.
>> Correct.
However, I wasn\'t interested in our enviornment, and so I didn\'t watch it then.
>> Correct.
As I did a science project at school,I first watched it.
>> I watched it before when I worked on a science project.
Before I watched this movie,I couldn\'t remember the plot vividly.
>> The first time I watched it, I couldn\'t remember the plot vividly.
All I could think of was that Leonardo DiCaprio is the presenter of this documentary.
>> Correct.
He meets leading experts working to create sustainable future.
>> Correct.
Such as the president of U.S,Pope Francis.
>> Correct.
They talk about the ways for our children to see what we\'re seeing today.
>> Correct.
Overall,the theme of this movie is climate change.
>> Correct.
One of the most memorable scenes is when DiCaprio meets Micael E.Mann,a climatology and goephysicist.
>> One of the most memorable scenes is when DiCaprio meets Micael E.Mann,a climatology and a goephysicist.
He explains why we cannot rely on politics to consider the Earth.Fossil fuels make profits to companies.
>> Correct.
Politicians get donations from companies.
>> Correct.
Though I have guessed money would hinder from implementing solutions,it was shocking to see the specific number.
>> Correct.
I realized environmental problems are more serious than thought.
>> I realized environmental problems are more serious than I thought.
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