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Q1. What role does love play in marriage and how could it possibly work well?
A1. The marriage is the highest level of love. But to marry the partner, the couple needs to live at the same house to understand each other well.
Q2. Why do you think divorce rates are increasing?
A2. I think it\'s because the life span of people is increasing, but the couples may not be able to live that long with each other.
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름],
The importance of love in marriage is endless. It brings health benefits to the couple. Having a closer bond reduces life\'s daily stress and anxieties. Without love, you and your partner could not be able to enjoy a happy, healthy relationship.
Certain factors that put people at higher risk for divorce are marrying young, limited education and income, living together before a commitment to marriage, having no religious affiliation, coming from a divorced family, and feelings of insecurity. ~ Teacher QUENNY
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Q1. What role does love play in marriage and how could it possibly work well?
Q1. What role does love play in marriage and how could it possibly work well? (CORRECT)
A1. The marriage is the highest level of love. But to marry the partner, the couple needs to live at the same house to understand each other well.
A1. Marriage is the highest level of love. But to marry the partner, the couple needs to live in the same house to understand each other well.
Q2. Why do you think divorce rates are increasing?
Q2. Why do you think divorce rates are increasing? (CORRECT)
A2. I think it\'s because the life span of people is increasing, but the couples may not be able to live that long with each other.
>> A2. I think it\'s because the life span of people is increasing, but couples may not be able to live that long with each other.
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Q1. What role does love play in marriage and how could it possibly work well?
A1. The marriage is the highest level of love. But to marry the partner, the couple needs to live at the same house to understand each other well.
Q2. Why do you think divorce rates are increasing?
A2. I think it\'s because the life span of people is increasing, but the couples may not be able to live that long with each other.
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