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Q : What do you do when you are under stress? / What are the ways to relieve your stress?
A : I play games during my free time.
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Hi [이름],
Students also feel stress when they get too little sleep, have a poor diet, and even from having too much downtime. To relieve your stress do something you enjoy and that will distract you for a while like listening to music, watching videos, reading, playing games, and others, eat healthily, change your mindset and adopt a positive attitude and laugh out loud actually increases oxygen and blood flow, which immediately reduces stress. ~ Always be an optimistic person\". ~ Teacher QUENNY
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Q : What do you do when you are under stress? / What are the ways to relieve your stress?
>> What do you do when you are under stress? / What are the ways to relieve your stress?(CORRECT)
A : I play games during my free time.
>> I usually play games during my free time to relieve my stress.
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Q : What do you do when you are under stress? / What are the ways to relieve your stress?
A : I play games during my free time.
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