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Q1. What are the advantages and disadvantages of buying a new/used car?
A1. A new car has more functions that a used car, so it\'s more comfortable. However, it is more expensive.
Q2. How would you describe your dream car?
A2. My dream car is big enough to ride comfortably.
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름],
When buying a new car, there are many factors to consider. The car needs to fulfill your wants, needs, and lifestyle demands. Also, you’ll want to consider the resale value, costs of ownership, desired features, incentive and trade-in options, and pricing and financing. Make sure you get the best value for your money.
New cars come with the latest safety features and are very likely to be reliable, though they can come with a higher price tag and higher insurance costs. Used cars are generally cheaper because the high depreciation of their early years is already behind them and you may not need as much insurance coverage. And one of the most significant advantages of buying a new car is that new cars come with a warranty and not all used vehicles do. But the price of a new car is typically much more expensive than if you bought a vehicle used. Teacher QUENNY
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Q1. What are the advantages and disadvantages of buying a new/used car?
>>Q1. What are the advantages and disadvantages of buying a new/used car? (CORRECT)
A1. A new car has more functions that a used car, so it\'s more comfortable. However, it is more expensive.
>> A1. A new car has more functions than a used car, so it\'s more comfortable. However, it is more expensive.
Q2. How would you describe your dream car?
>> Q2. How would you describe your dream car? (CORRECT)
A2. My dream car is big enough to ride comfortably.
>> My dream car is big enough to ride comfortably.(CORRECT)
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Q1. What are the advantages and disadvantages of buying a new/used car?
A1. A new car has more functions that a used car, so it\'s more comfortable. However, it is more expensive.
Q2. How would you describe your dream car?
A2. My dream car is big enough to ride comfortably.
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