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Q1. What\'s the purpose of advertising?
A1. Some people advertise to sell their products, while the others do to make people know and solve problems.
Q2. Why is it necessary to advertise?
A2. Commercial advertisements help people to sell their products, while the public service advertisments make people know and solve the problems.
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름],
Advertising is a marketing tactic involving paying for space to promote a product, service, or cause. And advertising aims to put a product or service in the spotlight in hopes of drawing it attention of consumers. And advertising is necessary because it can drive business growth and helps you to reach out to potential customers and encourage them to buy your products or services. ~Teacher QUENNY.
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Q1. What\'s the purpose of advertising? (CORRECT)
>> What\'s the purpose of advertising? (CORRECT)
A1. Some people advertise to sell their products, while the others do to make people know and solve problems.
>> Some people advertise to sell their products, while others do to make people know and solve problems.
Q2. Why is it necessary to advertise? (CORRECT)
>>Why is it necessary to advertise? (CORRECT)
A2. Commercial advertisements help people to sell their products, while the public service advertisments make people know and solve the problems.
>>A2. Commercial advertisements help people to sell their products, while public service advertisements make people know and solve problems.
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Q1. What\'s the purpose of advertising? (CORRECT)
A1. Some people advertise to sell their products, while the others do to make people know and solve problems.
Q2. Why is it necessary to advertise? (CORRECT)
A2. Commercial advertisements help people to sell their products, while the public service advertisments make people know and solve the problems.
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