Homework from the Feedback (2)
학생이 쓴 원문
Q1. What sports do you like?
A1. I like boxing and basketball.
Q2. What sport do you want to try?
A2. There\'s no sport that I want to try.
Q3. What sports do most people in your country enjoy?
A3. The sport that most people in my country enjoy is baseball.
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름],
Engaging in physical activities like sports improves your heart function. It helps to make your body more flexible and responsive. Moreover, sports help to improve brain activity as well, making it the best way to avoid numerous possible aging illnesses. Furthermore, it also brings positive energy, discipline, and other commendable qualities to your life. ~ Teacher QUENNY
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Q1. What sports do you like?
>> What sports do you like?(CORRECT)
A1. I like boxing and basketball.
>> I like boxing and basketball. (CORRECT)
Q2. What sport do you want to try?
>> What sport do you want to try?(CORRECT)
A2. There\'s no sport that I want to try.
>> There\'s no sport that I want to try.(CORRECT)
Q3. What sports do most people in your country enjoy?
>> What sports do most people in your country enjoy?(CORRECT)
A3. The sport that most people in my country enjoy is baseball.
>> The sport that most people in my country enjoy is baseball.(CORRECT)
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Q1. What sports do you like?
A1. I like boxing and basketball.
Q2. What sport do you want to try?
A2. There\'s no sport that I want to try.
Q3. What sports do most people in your country enjoy?
A3. The sport that most people in my country enjoy is baseball.
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